Wow, That's Amazing!
Amazing. You must have a very vivid imagination. Love the colour's (I'm Aussie) and style, it's just the backround looks a bit messy. But who cares! Very colourful, unlike my art submissions, and that gives you an 8/10, 4/5.
I'll tell u what it is.
A piece of art that needs a whole lot of improvement. Stay in the lines when u colour in. Make sure it's neat and worthy of being in the holy art portal. Overall two words, Needs Improvement!
Believe it or not, this drawing is just a little bit larger than a square inch, and was done entirely in pen. It appears much bigger here because I scanned it into my computer at 300 DPI, but it was tough to keep it as neat as I did while drawing it.
That said, your criticisms are entirely valid. The wings are not quite symmetrical, and it could definitely be neatened up a bit overall. Even so, it's just a small doodle, and not something I feel is worth investing more time into tidying up. But I appreciate your honest critique nonetheless. :)
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